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DCW Brute Force (12/20/04)

americamamushiPosted on 12/11/04 at 03:03:53

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Welcome to DCW Brute Force!  We're coming to you live from the Nationwide Arena in Columbus, Ohio!  Last week on the debut of Brute Force we brought you the opening stages of the World Heavyweight title tournament.  This week we'll bring you one of the semi-final matches: Kevin Nash vs. Raven!  Wait... I'm getting word that John Cena has just arrived at the arena, lets take it to the camera man we have in the back.

*The camera cuts to the back of the arena where, sure enough, we see John Cena walking in the back of the arena with his duffle bag.  He's intercepted by a DCW runner who hands Cena a sheet of paper and runs off*

John Cena: What the hells this? *to runner* thanks skippy.  *looking at the paper* Let's see what we have here... Raven vs. Kevin Nash... Abyss vs. Garrison Cade... Gene Snitsky vs. Charlie Haas... here we go... John Cena... *gets a puzzled look on his face*  See me sgned DCW President Chris Berry... see me?  What is this, a bad report card?  *walks off camera*

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"The Monster" Abyss  vs. Garrison Cade

We come back to the arena just as Cade is being announced.  Cade seems to be a little worried as Abyss makes his entrance.  He must've seen what he did to Tommy Dreamer last night on Rapid Fire!  The bell rings and Cade is a little hesitant to make the first move, but does anyway.  They lock up and push eachother around the ring a for a second or two before Cade attempts to irish whip Abyss, but Abyss reverses it!  Black Hole Slam!

Abyss pinned Garrison Cade with the Black Hole Slam in 0:00:22.
Rating: *

Another quick victory for Abyss.  At least it looks like Cade will be able to leave the ring on his own accord... once he comes back from la-la-land that is.

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*We see President Berry's office.  Berry is writing something.  He stops a second and it looks like he's trying to think of something.  He starts playing with his pencil.  Bobbing it up and down and staring at it.  Cena walks in.*

Chris Berry: Hey look,  Rubber pencil... oh.. sorry, and you're here... why?

John Cena: Somebody gave me this match run down and there was a note on here to see you.

CB: Ah yes.  You see last week yuo walked out on your match with Dan Severn.

JC: Yeah, so?

CB: Well I don't particularly care for people that walk out on their matches.

JC: I don't care, this ain't no popularity contest.

CB: And you're correct there Cena, this isn't a popularity contest... but these fans pay for their DCW tickets with a certain expectation.  Last week you failed them.  Now I know you don't care, but I do.  The fans are used to being barraged with insults by wrestlers, but they deserve better than being walked out on and not given a show.  Even if the wrestler they want to win doesn't they still deserve to see a whole match.  It's not up to you to just come and leave all willy-nilly cause you don't like the way things are going.

JC: You done?

CB: Yeah, I'm done... *Cena begins to leave* oh yeah, and you're facing Dan Severn again tonight

JC: *stops dead in his tracks* What?  I ain't facin Severn tonight!

CB: Oh but you are my friend, you are, *speaking as absolutely uncool as possible* so you better go thug yourself out "G" because "momma didn't raise no foo" do you "feel me"?

*Cena just leaves with a sour look on his face, but before he gets out of the door Bubba Ray comes in and bumps shoulders with Cena*

Bubba Ray Dudley: What the hell's his problem?

CB: He's probably got a 40 shoved up with... nevermind.  Can I assume that this visit involves some sort of issue you have with something?  Or is it my lucky day and you brought me cookies.

BRD:  This is bull.  No tag match tonight for the Dudleys?  What the hell?

CB: Look, the board of directors is working on it.  In fact I just hired a new team member to deal with this specific matter.  He's not in the arena tonight, but you'll meet him soon enough.

BRD: *getting frusterated* Alright then... if the Dudleys can't have a tag team match at least give me a match against Paul London.  He needs to be taught a lesson Dudleyville-style.

CB: Well... he's not booked in any matches tonight... and he is in the arena... and I do still feel kinda bad... so... sure.  Why the heck not.  Tonight we'll see Bubba Ray Dudley vs. Paul London... infact... we'll see it right now.  So... get out there. *Bubba isn't quite sure if Berry is serious about it being right now*  Seriously... now...... GO!  *Bubba Ray starts to leave the office* and shut the door on your way out, I have important business to attend to. *Bubba leaves and shuts the door on the way out*  Now... where was I... oh yeah.

*Berry goes back to doing the 'rubber pencil' trick as we go back to the ring for the introductions of London & Bubba Ray*

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Paul London vs. Bubba Ray Dudley

Bubba Ray wanted it and Bubba Ray got it.  Last night on Rapid Fire London defeated D-Von Dudley in a singles match and now Bubba, wanting to get revenge for his brother got President Berry to make the match for him.  London didn't look like he was taken by surprise by the unscheduled match.  D-Von, who of course accompanied his brother from another mother to the ring, took it upon himself to interfere a few small ways here and there.  Tripping, pulling down the top-rope, quick attack on the outside before throwing London back in.  London fought back though and was about to take it when Bubba pulled ref Trenton Kidd in the way of a leg lariat from London, knocking him down.  D-Von brought a chair into the ring to insure a Dudley victory, but out from the crowd behind D-Von comes Jerry Lynn!  He swipes the chair out of D-Von's hands and whacks him with it as he turns around.  Lynn drops the chair and over comes Bubba Ray, but he's met with a boot.  Cradle Piledriver onto the chair by Lynn!  Lynn throws the chair out of the ring and London goes up top.  London Calling!  Lynn slides out of the ring and revives the ref from the outside.  Kidd slides over and makes the three count!

Paul London pinned Bubba Ray Dudley with the London Calling in 0:16:27.
Rating: * 3/4
[Jerry Lynn interfered against Bubba Ray Dudley.]
[D-Von Dudley interfered against Paul London.]

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We're getting word that there is some commotion in the back.

*The camera cuts to the back of the arena where we see Cena with his dufflebag now leaving the arena.  The camera follows him as he walks into the parking area and towards a car.  You can hear something in the background.  The camera turns around and we see Dan Severn running toward Cena, Cena notices him and runs to the car.  He quickly gets in and gets the door shut, right as Severn reaches the car Cena gets it started and speeds away*

Dan Sever: Damn it!  [bleep]!

*Severn walks off camera*

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Gene Snitsky vs. Charlie Haas

Last night on Rapid Fire Snitsky got his first win.  Haas is still looking for his.  Both have their strengths and they stuck to what they know.  Snitsky used power moves and brawling, Haas used his technical and amateur skills.  As hard as Haas tried though, he just got rocked hard too many times to keep going and got hit with the Pump-Handle Side Powerslam.

Gene Snitsky pinned Charlie Haas with the Pump-Handle Side Powerslam in 0:15:58.
Rating: * 3/4

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*We are brought back to President Berry's office again... where he is still doing the 'rubber pencil' thing as both Dudleys burst in the door*

Bubba Ray Dudley: That's it!  We want a damn tag match!  And we want it against Paul London and Jerry Lynn!

Chris Berry: Hold on, hold on.  Just simmer down a second.

D-Von Dudley: Look!  We're-

CB: *Interupting* Simmer!  I'll tell you what.  I just got off the phone with my Tag Division Advisor or... TDA as I like to call him... it'd be funnier if that spelled a word... anyway, I just got off the phone with him and he thinks that it'd be a good idea... and I agree... to have DCW's first tag match... at Seasons Sleighings in two weeks.  And given recent events and requests... let's have that match be *Making a marque gesture* Paul London & Jerry Lynn vs... the Dudley Boys!

*The Dudley Boys begin rubbing their hands together and smirking in a smug manner, happy with their match for the PPV as the camera zooms in on their faces before cutting back to the ring*

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*Raven is introduced and comes out with Abyss.  Kevin Nash enters, but stays at the top of the ramp with a mic in his hand*

Kevin Nash: I see that you've brought you're little friend with you Raven.  I saw how Abyss won you that first round match last week and I know what Abyss is capable of.  Now I know that I'm not what I used to be, I've got bad knees, and I don't want to risk it facing both you and Abyss by myself.  So I've decided to hire a little... let's call him... an insurance policy.

*Out comes Jon Heidenreich in a dress shirt, tie and slacks.  Nash and Heidenreich comes down to the ring*

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DCW World Title Tournament Match: Raven vs. Kevin Nash

Both men had helpers in their corner for this semi-final match.  It seemed like Abyss wanted to help, but was hesitant due to the presence of Nash's 'insurance policy.'  Raven and Nash traded blows and went back and forth quite a bit.  The fans didn't really know who to cheer for since they dislike both wrestlers.  Much of the match the crowd chants "Nash Sucks! Raven Sucks!" over and over again or the clever "Nash sucks! Raven blows!" that appeared near the end.  Raven and Nash accidently sandwiched head ref Delmer McGowan between two lariats, knocking him out for a bit.  Abyss took it upon himself to get in the ring at that point, but no sooner did Abyss start getting into the ring did Heidenreich get in too.  Abyss went running at Nash but was met by Hedienreich's foot in his face and fell out of the ring.  Heidenreich then grabbed Raven and nailed him with a vicious looking F-5.  He exits the ring just as Delmer McGowan regains his composure.  Nash goes for the pin and easily gets it.

[DCW World Title Tournament - Round 1]
Kevin Nash defeated Raven after outside interference in 0:29:13.
Rating: -1/2*
[Abyss interfered against Kevin Nash.]
[Jon Heidenreich interfered against Raven.]

As the show goes off the air we see Nash mocking Raven and celebrating with Heidenreich at the top of the ramp as Abyss attends to Raven in the ring.
Snabbit888Posted on 12/11/04 at 03:23:40

Before I give you feedback, a couple of questions/general comments for you.

1) Are you booking or going unbooked with this?

2) I know this might just be a "Nubbs is being anal" thing, but there's a couple of "silly" typos in there that always throw me off a bit.  I'm a perfectionist with that kind of stuff, and it's by no means a "I can't read this drivel" thing, but typos just take away from it a bit.  I get pissed at myself every time I catch a typo AFTER I've posted it, because I spell check and proofread like a bastard.  This is probably me just being picky though.

As for feedback...

I like the character you're developing with Chris Berry.  It reminds me of Mick Foley as the commish, in that he's a goofy SOB, but he's competent enough to do the job.  The stuff with Cena is coming along nicely... nice touch for him to just leave the building rather than do something he didn't want to do.  As long as this doesn't become to "Vince vs. Austin," you have a nice story on your hands here.

Dudleyz vs. Lynn/London!  Excellent.  Lynn/London look like they could be a very cool team.

Nash vs. Raven went almost 30 minutes?  That poor poor crowd.  Heidenreich as a bodyguard, eh?  Interesting.  I think that's a good use for him.  Have him wrestle sparingly and he's a great addition to the roster.  He has the size and presence to be very intimidating, and as long as you don't let him embarrass himself in the ring for too long, it should work.

So Nash vs. Hogan or Steamboat... interesting.

Good stuff yet again.
americamamushiPosted on 12/11/04 at 04:49:20

1) Are you booking or going unbooked with this?
Booked.  I decided it's better for developement.

2) I know this might just be a "Nubbs is being anal" thing, but there's a couple of "silly" typos in there that always throw me off a bit.  I'm a perfectionist with that kind of stuff, and it's by no means a "I can't read this drivel" thing, but typos just take away from it a bit.  I get pissed at myself every time I catch a typo AFTER I've posted it, because I spell check and proofread like a bastard.  This is probably me just being picky though.
Usually I don't have many typos, but I'm been having trouble typing with one (now two) finger with a bandaid on it.  So when there are typos it's prolly just cause my giant bandaid hits key on accident and I don't catch it because I usually don't have to look for those things ;)  I'll try and be more carefull while my fingers recover.

I like the character you're developing with Chris Berry.  It reminds me of Mick Foley as the commish, in that he's a goofy SOB, but he's competent enough to do the job.
Hurray!  :)  I enjoy comedy in wrestling here and there.

The stuff with Cena is coming along nicely... nice touch for him to just leave the building rather than do something he didn't want to do.  As long as this doesn't become to "Vince vs. Austin," you have a nice story on your hands here.
It won't become Vince vs. Austin (At least, not if I can help it)

Dudleyz vs. Lynn/London!  Excellent.  Lynn/London look like they could be a very cool team.
I thought they'd make a good pairing too, hence their use.

Heidenreich as a bodyguard, eh?  Interesting.  I think that's a good use for him.
Thats what I thought.  I was kicking around a few other names (Big Show, but he was too big a name, Nathan Jones, but I he just didn't seem to... fit as well, thought about Batista too)

So Nash vs. Hogan or Steamboat... interesting.
Yeah... hopefully the ends will justify the means.

I'm surprised you have no wonderment as to who the TDA is:)
Snabbit888Posted on 12/11/04 at 04:56:27

Oh, I wondered... it's just far too soon to speculate.

And thank God you're booking. :)  Booking = good, IMO.  Non-booked is fun for the simmer, but sometimes can be rough for the reader.  I used to run unbooked all the time, but it would get frustrating when you try to establish a dominant champion and he loses the belt to an 0-40 guy.
silentobserverPosted on 12/11/04 at 06:38:33

Me likey new card!! Hehe.  ;D

I've always liked Cena and now I find myself seeing him as a jackass... so good work. :)

Glad to see the first tag match is booked.  I agree that London/Lynn makes a nice tag team.   You'll get alot of good story out of them and the Dudely's.

I'm thinking it'll be Steamboat vs. Nash, in my opinion.  I'dl like to see that match.  

Well done! :)
Critic of the DawnPosted on 12/11/04 at 07:04:56

On 12/11/04 at 04:56:27, Snabbit888 wrote:Oh, I wondered... it's just far too soon to speculate.

And thank God you're booking. :) Booking = good, IMO. Non-booked is fun for the simmer, but sometimes can be rough for the reader. I used to run unbooked all the time, but it would get frustrating when you try to establish a dominant champion and he loses the belt to an 0-40 guy.
That's the nice thing about Jobbers.  And strict pushes.  And not giving title shots to guys that don't earn them. ;D

Eric "Critic of the Dawn"
americamamushiPosted on 12/11/04 at 07:34:05

I've always liked Cena and now I find myself seeing him as a jackass... so good work. :)
It's good to know if the direction of certain characters is getting over, obviously this one is. :)

I'm thinking it'll be Steamboat vs. Nash, in my opinion.  I'dl like to see that match.
Not trying to give anything away, I just want everyone to remember that there is a means to my madness and like I said before, hopefully the ends will justify the means :D  (Vague enough?) ;)